I recently wrote an essay for english class on vegetarianism and I would love your feedback. My goal for the essay is to remove some of the factual evidence and replace it with more personal statements. I hope you can help me, I've worked on the essay for a while and really need new eyes looking at it. <a href="http://docs.google.com/View?docid=dgnwvrkr_1gwvdzg&revision=_published" target="_blank">Click here</a> to view my essay, it's published via google documents. Thanks!