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Mods, please do not murdge my threads. I have posted this in another bored, but wanted to post it here because there seems to be alot of teen writers that only visit this board.<br><br><br><br><br><br>
I was thinking I wanted to book together a book of animal rights poems and try to get it published. I have a few I wrote, but that wouldn't be enough for a whole book. Does anyone have any poems they wrote on animal rights they are willing to let be seen by the public? You will be given all credit for your work, your name (and location if you wish) will be placed at the bottom of the poem. If you do not wish to say your name on a public, you may PM me it, or suggest another way I could credit your work to you. Thank you so much!
 

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<span>great idea! unfortunatly I cant write a poem to save my life, but if you get it punlished I will buy it. can you post some of your poems I would love to read them.:</span>bobo:
 

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<div class="quote-block">Originally Posted by <strong>Raspberry06</strong> <a href="/forum/post/0"><img alt="View Post" class="inlineimg" src="/img/forum/go_quote.gif" style=""></a><br><br><span>great idea! unfortunatly I cant write a poem to save my life, but if you get it punlished I will buy it. can you post some of your poems I would love to read them.:</span>bobo:</div>
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Sure, I will start another thread to post some when I get a few more written <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/grin.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":D">
 

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Heres one that I wrote, not very good, and I only spent a few minutes on it..I should of put more effort into it<br><br><br><br>
"The knife dripped of the cold blood of a friend she never did love. As she stared at his body, the only remains of a soul that used to walk this world with out a fear, she realized what she had done; she had honestly stopped a beating heart. That life was kept here by her, fed by her, bathed by her. That life looked up to her for warmth and comfort in his first nights on this earth. That life was very young, still dependant on others to show him about the world around him. That life put all the trust he had into her. She was all that life knew, she gave him everything he needed, or so it seemed. Everything until now. That life is over. He is now nothing but a pile of flesh. How can one life become so dependant on another? Was he dependant to her, to keep him alive, or was she dependant on him for company during the day? Was she dependant on that life for a bit power and importance in this world? When he started to grow, did the power she once held completely over him slip away until she did the ultimate thing to control him, by killing him? The real question here is, why does this sound so cruel to you when you think this is a mother killing a child, but when I tell you this is about a farmer, on a small ranch, that had taken a baby calf away from it’s mother the day it was born, raised it, became attached to it, but then still brutally killed it for veal, you will look away, and any compassion towards that life you had, will die with it?"<br><br><br><br>
Its I guess to show even the small farms that arent factory farming are still cruel
 

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omg thats so sad! and really good...it made me cry and REALLY made me regret eating a chicken patty earlier <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/bigcry.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":cry:">
 

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omg thats so sad! and really good...it made me cry and REALLY made me regret eating a chicken patty earlier <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/bigcry.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":cry:"></div>
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Thanks im glad you liked it!! and Im really glad the point got across
 

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Very deep. Haunting how you presented it in such a dark, dream-like way.</div>
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Thank You <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/grin.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":D">
 

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Just wanted to bump this thread, incase anyone has any poems <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/grin.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":D">
 

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<div class="quote-block">Originally Posted by <strong>Raspberry06</strong> <a href="/forum/post/0"><img alt="View Post" class="inlineimg" src="/img/forum/go_quote.gif" style=""></a><br><br><span>great idea! unfortunatly I cant write a poem to save my life, but if you get it punlished I will buy it. can you post some of your poems I would love to read them.:</span>bobo:</div>
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Same here!
 

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I'm not sure but maybe it'd be a nice idea if some of the profits'd go to animal rights organisations and stuff<img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/smiley.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":)"><br><br><br><br>
Unfortunately I don't have a poem to add, I'm working on one but it's in Dutch hehe.
 

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I wrote one a long time ago, and in French of course. I'm afraid it wouldn't get very well through the translation.
 

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I havn't written any. It takes a special "mood" in order for me to write poems. I'll probally hit that point soon, because I'm in the meat, poultry and fish section of culinary arts. Yuck! How about short stories and journals and the such? Will it be more then a poem book, because it would be awsome if you had a break off from the "Chicken Soup" books, and had "Vegetable Soup for the Veg*n Soul", hehe!<br><br><br><br>
Please post more poems! The 1 posted was sooooooo good! Please post some more!
 

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lol jennifer that sounds funny! ill post some more when I write some <img alt="" class="inlineimg" src="/images/smilies/grin.gif" style="border:0px solid;" title=":D"> thanks for all our help everyone
 

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It's such a pleasure to post among people who care as much as you guys do for what I have to say. On the whole boards. I mean, whoa.
 
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