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i wrote this poem this afternoon.

it is about the suffering of our fellow earthlings.

i don't know if you'll like it, but tell me what you think.

be honest(but not to honest, hehe
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I need to know why.

By Morgana

3/29/2007

I have a question.

I need to know why.

I need to know why, why they all cry.

I need to know why, why they all die.

I have a question.

I need to know the answer.

I need to know the answer to all my questions.

I need to know the answer to all the suffering.

I have a question.

I need to know how.

I need to know how this could happen.

I need to know how we could let it happen.

I have a question.

I need to know how to solve the problems.

I have a question.

I need to know why.

I need to know why, why they all have to cry.

I need to know why, why they all have to die.

I have a question.

I need to know why.

I need to know why, why we let them cry.

I need to know why, why we let them die.

A poem about the suffering of our fellow earthlings, human or not.

-morgana

Copyright 2007.
 

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To me theres too much repetition. I know that's probably the point though.

Otherwise, I like it. I made a similar one myself actually! Might as well write it here, (im not trying to hijack the thread, just funny how we have the same idea. We're the same age too =D)

Ask the bigger questions

but expect no answers

Question the authorities

but expect no changes

Desperate tries to make people see

but the world remains

blindfolded

Similar idea I think! The last part of my poem is also about realizing that people are eating dead animals, without caring or thinking (they're blindfolded)

Keep it up!
 
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