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#1 Old 11-07-2008, 02:18 PM
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AUXIqPnm9VI



I hope you'll like it.

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#2 Old 11-08-2008, 02:09 AM
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Here's another version, with Goldfinger's audio.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-gIXNIXLYE
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#3 Old 11-08-2008, 03:08 PM
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The wording was a little awkward in a couple of those slides.
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#4 Old 11-08-2008, 03:16 PM
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Good video.



Check your spelling.
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#5 Old 11-09-2008, 05:02 AM
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Could someone give me examples, because I still have a habit of putting Polish phrases in English text?
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#6 Old 11-10-2008, 08:49 PM
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You did a good job with the picture selection and ordering imo. Here are the grammatical things I noticed.



at 0:24

"They are self-couscious", I think you meant "self-conscious"



at 0:53

"We don't need meat and vegan diet is healthier meat-based one", this is missing a couple connector words. New stuff in bold. "We don't need meat and a vegan diet is healthier than a meat-based one"



at 1:00

This is fine but I would've said it differently: "Veganism is better for our environment"



at 1:50

I've always seen words quoted like "no" rather than having the first quote being low on the line.



at 2:09

The word becasue should be spelled because. Also the quoting thing again with "yes".
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Very pretty. =]
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