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wow
April 2nd, 2006, 09:48 PM
after reading it through it it may seem like it doesnt rhyme but if u know the beat and the tone changes it fits together nicely.
i made it really quickly and ill probably change it later. when ive finished it i'll sing it and find a way to let u guys hear it.
Weather Man
(excellent guitar intro)…(I’ll make it later)
i'd hate to be the weatherman
id hate to reeeeport the weather
id hate to tell all the little boys and girls
that school will be canceled tomorrow
due to 3 feet of snow
because i just happen to know
it would break thhoose childrens hearts

because they looovee schoool
they yearn too learn
they are appeased
with 3 times 3

that is why id hate tooo bee a weattttthhhhher man
(instrument break)
id rather be the dude at mcdonalds
who flips the burgers and whose boss is ronald
thee clooown
INFACT it wouldnt be baaad, being a clown
i havent ever beeen able to frown
all other clowns woould go down
because im the clown who deserves to be crowned
clown of the yeaaaaarr
(short intrumental break)
i actually respect the weather man
and all the weather ladies
who report the weather daily
but its urr fault
uve been faaairrly warned.
it was ur idea
to becooooooooomeeee (to becoooomme) (to becooome) (to become)
a weather man.


i think ur a fool
u should be burned.
if i bought u at a store,
ud bee returned.
i dont wanna hear it.
courts ajourned.
just go and break more childrens heaaarts
ya go and break more childrens heart
just go and break more chilrends hearts
oooooo go
and
breakk
moooore
childrens hearts..
and bring me a salad while ur at it because all this singing is meaking me hungry
animallover7249
April 3rd, 2006, 05:01 PM
ummm I think its horrible...but thats just my opinion
VegWithEdge
April 3rd, 2006, 05:05 PM
ummm I think its horrible...but thats just my opinion

That was a little rude, you could have given them some constructive criticism instead...
skunkpumpkin
April 3rd, 2006, 05:09 PM
haha animal lover is quite rude.

the "song" i think is...trippy.
wow
April 3rd, 2006, 11:59 PM
ummm I think its horrible...but thats just my opinion
chill...
Popstar2be
April 4th, 2006, 10:42 AM
Um, ya, animalover was rite. It duz kinda suck. And wuts with the breaking kids hearts dude? Was that sarcasm? Cuz if it wasnt, thats weird, cuz kids luv being out of skool. I hope that was sarcasm. Anyways, ya, I didnt like it.
bethany17
April 4th, 2006, 05:26 PM
Seems a bit long, and campfire-ish, but interesting!
wow
April 4th, 2006, 10:20 PM
Um, ya, animalover was rite. It duz kinda suck. And wuts with the breaking kids hearts dude? Was that sarcasm? Cuz if it wasnt, thats weird, cuz kids luv being out of skool. I hope that was sarcasm. Anyways, ya, I didnt like it.
ya definetly sarcasm. the whole things a big joke you guys, dont take it seriosuly. i dont really have anything against weathermans. i just woke up that morning and declared "Im going to make a song about weathermen!"
Pink Bullets
April 4th, 2006, 10:35 PM
Hahaha, I actually liked it.

It was amusing. Loosen up, guys. Sheesh. :-P

-Pink :bow:
tomatotomato
April 4th, 2006, 11:21 PM
i actually love the irony-ness of the whole thing.
Popstar2be
April 5th, 2006, 12:11 AM
Ok, glad its sarcasm. I still kinda think it sucked, alot, but ya, whatev.
ilovefoil
April 5th, 2006, 02:50 PM
well, i think it was jolly good effort old bean. i think mentioning salad was a very strong ending :)
wow
April 5th, 2006, 10:28 PM
uugh my computer is messsed up. all these years of searching porn screwed it up. jkjk (no pun intended). I keep trying to record and it tells me another program is recording please shut it off and try again. anyone know how to stop it? i'll go ask in the computer section just in case.
Gnarly
April 6th, 2006, 10:22 AM
I thought it was cool. Amusing. :)
UseHerName
April 8th, 2006, 03:01 PM
It would help if we could hear it. Usually songs like that sound better with music, and where you can hear the person sing it.
wow
April 8th, 2006, 06:07 PM
It would help if we could hear it. Usually songs like that sound better with music, and where you can hear the person sing it.
ive been trying to record it but my computer is being mean and wont let me record. it keeps telling me another application is already recording when nothin else is even open... neone know how to stop it?
animallover7249
April 8th, 2006, 06:43 PM
What methods have you tried in stopping it? Are any messengers opened? or anything using sound? hit the 3 keys and make sure you have no applications running.
bkhill5
April 10th, 2006, 11:58 PM
It didnt suck. People don't have to be so mean/music snobby. At least you have the guts to write a song (i dont) aaannndd then share it with a bunch of people. I hope to hear it soon. What site are you trying to upload it to??
wow
April 11th, 2006, 12:08 AM
idk yet... first i have toget my recording thing working again. any suggestions on sites?
VegWithEdge
April 11th, 2006, 12:40 AM
idk yet... first i have toget my recording thing working again. any suggestions on sites?

a lot of my guy friends upload their music onto myspace.com i'm not sure how they do it but its worth a try?
bkhill5
April 11th, 2006, 07:48 PM
ive heard of freehomepage.com
but i havnt tried it. good luck
Popstar2be
April 11th, 2006, 07:52 PM
It didnt suck. People don't have to be so mean/music snobby. At least you have the guts to write a song (i dont) aaannndd then share it with a bunch of people. I hope to hear it soon. What site are you trying to upload it to??


Well, I know I was snobby, but I was just voicing my opinion. Nothing against wow at all. I just dont like it. Sorry to be a snob.
animallover7249
April 11th, 2006, 08:02 PM
I agree with popstar, if they ask for an opinion im going to give it to him..and not say its good just because he had "guts" to write it and post it. I am going to say what I think. Ya its cool that he writes and posts it ect ect..But if I don't like it I am not going to lie.