The 1st Chapter of My Fanfic! (Please read and comment!)

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Ok, i made 1 of those annoying fanfics! Its about Gerard Way, my friends really like it! Here ya go, read and tell me wut u think! Also, I decided that Gerards 17 in the story, so that would make Mikey 14! They kinda look like they r! lol! Anyways, ya, they look just like they do now also! So anyways, here ya go!

Chapter 1: Movie

I was so bored, it was Saturday. I decided
2 find all the change I could laying around
the house, and went 2 go see a movie! I
had already seen it, but the 1st time, my
friend Lizz went with me, and she spent
the whole time talking pretty loudly on her
cell phone! It was SO annoying! I couldnt
hear the movie, so i have 2 go and see it
again! So, I got in my car, tryed 2 drive
there, but because of the cold, the stupid
car wouldnt start! I got mad, kicked it so
hard it left a huge dent, (not that there
wernet already 30! I get mad alot!) and I
walked! I guess I need the exercise
anyway! May as well! Well, about 20
minutes later I was there! The preveiws
had already started, but I hated them
anyways! I decided 2 play in the arcade at
the theatre 4 a few minutes, I just didnt
want 2 watch preveiws! Finally, I went
and sat down, still some preveiws, but
I didnt want 2 miss it this time! Like I
said, because of my stupid friend I didnt
get 2 watch it! Well, its ok i guess! She
got me back the money I payed for it, so
whatever! Anyways, enough about
stupid friends! Ok, well, I saw my other
friend Malissa in the theatre this time,
and we talked for like 5 minutes, then we
went to go sit down in seperate rows.
(She was there with her family!) Well,
about 10 or 15 minutes into the movie,
2 guys walked in. 1 was wearing glasses,
he was pretty skinny, and was wearing an
Anthrax tshirt! The other 1 was slightly
shorter then him, was pale, and had long
black hair! They came and sat down next
2 me. Most of the theatre was full, so they
had 2 sit there! The pale 1 sat right next 2 me,
and the other 1 right next 2 him. They
also talked pretty loudly. It was annoying!
I was gonna have to see the movie again!
I almost walked out, but i decided maybe
they'de shut up! They didn't! They just
got louder! The other people ignored
them, but it was hard to do that when
there right by your ear!
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Well, it was after the movie, and I was
standing outside the theatre trying 2
figure out the best route to walk home! It
was a small town, so it wasnt far from my
house, but it was freezing outside! Well,
a few guys were pushing each other
around, (jokingly) and 1 bumped into me,
and I slipped on a peice of ice! I totally
blacked out!

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The next thing I remember, was waking
up in somebodys arms! I still was kinda
out of it, I hit my head pretty hard! Then I
heard a voice,

"Finally!" they sounded kinda mad, and
worried at the same time! "I thought you
would never wake up! My brother was
about 5 seconds away from calling an
ambulance!"
The voice sounded sorta familliar! But
from where? I opened my eyes, I was
pretty freaked out! I didn't know where I
was! Then I remembered, someone
knocked me down! Of course accidentally
(i think!). But still! Ow! I looked up, and I
was kinda mad!
"Hey!" I yelled, "Your that annoying kid!"
It was that stupid kid, the pale 1, who
wouldnt shut up! I was kinda mad, but
didnt know weather 2 stay angry, or
forgive him! He was trying 2 help me after
all! "Someone knocked me down!" I didnt
know what to say!

"Ya!" he replied, "It was my little brother!"
"Where is he?" I asked, furiously! I mean,
so what if this guy was helping me, he did
knock me down! Not him, but he was part
of the group that was goofing around
when I fell! I had every right to be mad at
him!
"Hes in the theatre getting ice for your
head! Hes really sorry!"
"Well, ok! Whatever! I am gonna call my
Mom to come and pick me up!" I tryed 2
get up, but I could hardley move!
"Whats her number?" He asked me, I
didnt know if I should give it 2 him or not!
"Why should I tell you? I dont even know
your name!"
"Its Gerard Way! And give me her number
so I can call her for you!"
I gave him a hard time for like, 5 minutes
but then finally gave it 2 him! I sat up
wearily, but i had a HUGE headache! And
my ankle hurt! I couldnt believe guys!
There so stupid! I didnt want to forgive
him! Well, my Mom got there, and she put
me in the car, and went back to talk to
Gerard! I was sitting there like "Mom!
Come on!" I didn't know if she was just
talking to them, or yelling at them, but
either way, it did take a long time! It was
so annoying! I know, I say annoying alot,
but its because I get annoyed alot!
Anyway, she finally got in the car!
"Mom!" I kinda said loudly, but not
yelling! "What were you doing talking to
those guys! They are the ones that
knocked me over! Come on!"
"Sorry honey!" she always says "honey"
when she is trying 2 make me feel better,
even though she knows it doesn't work!
"I was just asking about the accident!"
she sounded like she was friends with
those guys! "They said they didn't mean
to push you! They are very sorry!" How
Did She Know!?!?!?!?!?! They could've
lied! I can't believe her! She is so, just,
AH!!!! I get mad at her quite often!
"Ya! Whatever!" I said, in a ticked off
tone!
"Oh peahes!" she uses pet names often
2! "I am sorry! I just wanted to talk to
them for a few minutes! It looked and
sounded like that Gerard one was trying
to help you!"
"Ok," i started, "first of all, Ya Right!
That was the one that was messing
around with other guys, and hit the one
who hit me and pushed me! 2nd of all,
he was annoying! The whole movie him
and glasses boy wouldnt shut up! There
not nice! They werent trying 2 help me,
there annoying jerks!" then I looked at her
with that little "i dont wanna talk
anymore!" look! I was furious!
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Well, when I got home, I was watching TV
while laying on the couch with an ice pack
on my ankle and head, and then I heard a
knock on the door. I limmped over and
opened it. It was Gerard!

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So, wudya think? Please tell me! Please! Also, just 2 let yall no, my family isnt like the family in this story! There alot nicer, and dont use pet names all the time! All the people in this storys personalitys, are totally made up!

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Ok, here it is! The next chapter!

Chapter 2: Red Rose


"What the, but, you, and, Ok, what are
you doing here?" I was so suprised! I
mean, I didnt exactly expect it!
"Oh," he started, but I cut him off!
"Why are you here? How do you even
know my address?" I was so confused! I
was a mixture of confused, mad, and sick!
"Ok, your Mom gave me you address!
you know, in case I wanted to come and
check on you!"
"Who gave you the right to do that?"
"Um, your Mom?" he also sounded
confused! Just then, who else, Mom
walked in!
"Ok!" I started half yelling, "What is
wrong with you?!?!?!?!" I was so mad at
my Mom, I couldnt help it! "Why did you
give this guy our address?!?!?!?! What
the heck were you thinking?!?!?!?! He
bugged me 2 death durring the movie,
and then him, his stupid brother, and his
dumb friends knocked me over! So why
did you give him our address!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"Well," she started sweetly "He seemed
concerned about you! I thought he could
come and see if you were alright! Are
you darling?"
"I was untill he showed up!" I said, kinda
angrily, kinda sarcasticly!
"Honey Bunches!" she finally sounded
half mad! "Do not insult a guest! Come in!"
He started 2 walk in, not sure if he should
or not,
"No!" I yelled, "Stay there!" He walked
back out.
"Puddin!" my Mom sounded mad at me!
"Stop being rude to our guest!"
"Guests are only guests if you invite
them to your house! I didnt invite him!
There 4, NOT A GUEST!" I was furious
with her! How could she!
"Thats it Lola!" She finally got angry!
Man! She only calls me by my name when
she is totally furious! Like, when I was 10
and shaved the guinea pig, that was a "Oh
dumplin!" When I set fire to the lawn
chairs, now that was a "Lola" moment!
She always calls me a pet name, not by
my real name! She only does that when
shes mad, like now!
"He is coming in the house weather you
like it or not! You got it! He helped you,
I invited him over for dinner! Thats final!
Come in now!"
"No! Stay out! Thats final!" It wasnt as
much that I was mad at Gerard, I just
really didnt want my Mom 2 win! I hate it
when she wins! Cause well, she always
wins! I wanted 2 win this once!
"No Lola! Hes coming in! Come in
now! And Lola, go 2 your room!"
"FINE!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed, and I ran
upstairs crying!
"Sorry about that!" My annoying
Mom was appologizing 4 my rudness!
Not saying I wasnt rude, but my Mom
deserved it! I kinda felt bad though! I
must've made Gerard upset! But hey,
its my Moms fault! She started it by
inviting him over in the first place! She
always does everything without asking
me first! It sucks! About, 10 minutes
later, I heard my Dad walk in! Him
and Gerard talked for a few minutes,
then my Mom came up to get me 4
the dinner I didnt want 2 attened! She
made me! She threatend to ground me
if I didnt go, and my friend was
having a movie night this Saturday, so
I kinda had 2 go 2 dinner. It sucked!
It wasnt fair! Anyways, when I got
there, I just sat there, quite, while my
Mom and Dad talked 2 Gerard, and
amongst themselves. There annoying!
Anyways, my Mom started talking
2 my Dad about how "rude" I was
earlier. I couldnt believe she was
bringing it up again! That is so like
her! I was again, furious!
"Mom!" I yelled, "Why would you
bring this up again?!?!?! I mean, sure,
we had a fight earlier, but you dont
have 2 keep it going!!!!!!!"
"Well sugar pie," she started, making
me really mad! "I just wanted to tell
you father how selfish you were
being earlier!"
"Thats not fair! You drag me 2 this
dinner I didnt even want 2 be at, then
you start a fight!?!?!?!? As if I am not
furious enough! I didnt even want 2
be here!!!!!"
"Well, 2 bad Lola!!!!! Your here now,
so eat dinner!" My Mom wouldnt
quit! Gerard just sat there, looking
down, my Dad kinda laughed!
"No! I am not eating dinner! I am
going 2 my room 4 the rest of the night!
Away from all you people I didnt even
want to be around in the 1st place!!!!"
And I stormed out crying.
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"Oh darling!" My Dad said 2 my Mom,
(i could here them from my room
upstairs, right above the kitchen!)
"Why did you have 2 start a fight?"
"Well!" my Mom replied, sounding
kinda mellow again actually! "I just
thought it would be funny."
"Well, it wasnt!" I yelled from upstairs.
They started talking again, trying 2 be
quite, but failing misserably!
"Go talk to her!" my Dad told my Mom.
"No! I dont want her 2 talk 2 me!" I
screamed.
"Ok, ill go!" said my Dad.
"No!" I yelled. I hated him 4 telling
my Mom to come and talk 2 me.
"Ill go!" Gerard said, kinda sweetly!
"I dont know if she will calm down,
or scream even louder, but better then
you guys going!"
"Yes!" My Dad said, "Ya, I soppose so!"
I didnt object 2 this! I mean, if I said
rude things 2 my parents, I have 2 live
with them! This guy will be gone in
less then an hour, and hopefully I will
never have 2 see him again! So, I
pretended that I didnt hear them.
Well, when Gerard knocked on my
bedroom door, I was still crying,
laying on my bed facing the opposite
way of the door.
"Its open!" I said, still crying.
"Hey! Um, its Gee! Mind if I come
in?"
"No!" I replied, "You can come in as
long as my Mom didnt send you!"
"She didnt!" he said back, I knew that,
my Dad sent him. I wasnt stupid! I
wasnt as dumb as they all thought! They
just think I am some stupid kid with
a big mouth that needs an attitdue
adjustment! I hated it! It wasnt fair!
And now, because of my Mom, Gerard
probably thinks the same thing! Its not
fair! My Mom is the reason I dont have
any friends! I have 2, Lizz, and Melisa!
I hardley ever get 2 see them though.
We go 2 different schools. Anyways,
Gerard tryed 2 make me feel better. He
was nicer then I thought. But I know
that he thinks I am some stupid psycho
that needs an attitude adjusment just
like my parents both think. Its not fair!
"So," Gerard started, "Why do you
fight with your Mom so much?"
"Cuz!" I replied angrily, "Shes always
wrong! Thats it! Shes always wrong,
and she doesnt even know who I am!"
"Sorry! She does kinda seem annoyng!"
Gerard actually sounded convincing.
Like he actually cared what I had 2 say.
I tested this theory.
"I also hate it when people push me!"
I said, obviously talking about what
happened earilier.
"Ya! I once hit a guy 4 accidentally
tripping me!" he wasnt faking! He
also laughed! Hes actually not as evil
as I thought! He continued, "Ya, Mikeys
really really sorry! He seriously didnt mean
it! I am suprised you didnt kill us!" He
also kinda laughed when he said that.
I smiled 4 an instant, then went back 2
being angry.
"Ya! My Mom is just terrible!" I changed
the subject. "She is so corny! She tries
2 be 1 of those little brady bunch Moms!
Then when she fails, she goes 2 being
mad at me! She is really annoying
somtimes!"
"Ya!" he agreed! He wasnt working 4
my Mom! "She does kinda seem, well,
psycho!"
"Exactly!" I said back, "She is terrible!"
"Ya, well, i got to go home! Sorry!" He
said.
"Ok! Bye!" I said back sadly, I didnt
want him 2 leave yet! He was actually
pretty nice! When I heard him walk out
the front door, I remembered! I didnt
get his phone number! I ran downstairs,
but his car was already half way down
the road! I was upset! Then, I looked
down. There, laying on the porch, was
a rose! A beautiful red rose! It had
a piece of paper on it. It read,

Sorry I had 2 go home! I had a
great time at your house! Heres
my phone number, and email
address! ttyl!
-Gerard


It said on the back his phone number,
and email address! And the rose was so
pretty! When I got back in the house, my
Mom started yelling at me again. I didnt
care! All I could think about was that beautiful
red rose!

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Ok, heres the 3rd chapter!


Chapter 3
Phone Call

Well, I called Gerard about 4 hours after he left!
By then, it was about midnight! All of the people
I knew have gotten used 2 me calling so late, so
will he! So, I called!

"Hello?" I heard a voice, but it wanst Gerards.
"Who is it?"

"Um, Its Lola! May I speak 2 Gerard?"

"Ya! Whatever!" replied the voice, hey, I know
who that is!

"Hey!" I yelled, "Your the kid that knocked me
over earlier 2day!"

"Oh, ya, sorry about that!" he sounded kinda
nervous!

"So!" I made him nervous on purpose. I liked
giving people a hard time.

"Um, hey I said im sorry!" he still sounded
nervous! Hahahahaha!

"Um, Hey, My ankle still hurts!" I said, complaining
at him, trying 2 mess around with him.

"Ya, well, um, heres Gerard!" he gave up the
phone fast. I could hear Gerard in the background
asking who it was. As soon as Mikey replied,
(his brother!) he started talking.

"Hi Lola! Wuts up?" he sounded tired! I must have
waken him up.

"Nuthin! I just wanted 2 call you! I wanted someone
2 talk 2, and my friends Moms have already ban me
from calling after 10!"

"Oh! Ok." He said, yawning loudly.

"Did I wake you up? I could call back later."

"No," he replied sweetly, "Its ok! I get woke up
alot right Mikey!" the last "right Mikey" he said as
loud as possible so his brother could hear.

"Haha!" I laughed. I couldnt help it.

"Ya, and whats so funny?" he said, also kinda
laughing.

"You and your brother! Heehee!" I couldnt help
but laugh! I mean, he is funny!

"So, what do you wanna talk about?" he asked, still
yawning.

"I am really sorry I woke you up! I really could call back,"

"No! Mikey wouldve woke me up in a little bit anyways,
RIGHT MIKEY!" I could hear Mikey yelling at him in
the background, telling him 2 shut up. It was funny.

"Heehee! Sorry! Heehee!" I giggle all the time! Most
people find it annoying.

"Ya, whatever! Hey, what school do you go 2? My and
Mikey just moved here, so I need some1 2 show me
around the school!" He asked, I dont know what 2 say.

"Um, ya! Sure! I would love 2!" cool! A chance 2
spend all school day with Gerard! Yes! Wait a minute,
whats wrong with me?!?!?!

"Ok! Cool! Do you have any other friends there?"
No! I wanted 2 just yell no my friends all go 2 other
schools! WAAAA! But I didnt! I kept myself from it!

"No. My friends all go 2 different schools then me.
Wait, how are we even sure we go 2 the same school?"

"Well, I go 2 the highschool just down the road from
your house! Where do you go?" he asked, very sarcasticly.
Anoyying even! Oh well! hes Gerard! I didnt care.

"Ok, your right shut up!" i yelled. He laughed. "So, wanna
walk me 2 school? I would drive, but my car doesnt
work, and I am not riding in the same car as my Mom!"

"Ya! Ok! Ill see you at 7:00 then?"

"Ok. See ya then." and we both hung up! I didnt know
what was wrong with me! I just couldnt wait 2 see him!
There was somthing up with me! I decided 2 go 2 bed,
so I would be up when he gets here!

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Chapter 4: New Kid


My Mom woke me up at 6:29 am.
"Mom!!!!!!" I yelled at her, "Why didnt you wake me up
sooner?!?!?!"
"You usually hate it when I do!" thats never stopped her
before!
"Mom! Move! I need to get ready 4 school NOW!!!!"
"Ok! Ok!" she sounded pretty annoyed, and confused! I
was never this enthusiastic about school! She didnt know
what to think! "May I ask why?"
"Because! Gerards walking me 2 school, and he will be
here at 7!!!!!!!"
"Oh! Finally, you have a friend!" she made it sound like
I was some loner who hated people and lived in a dark
cave away from all of society!
"Yes Mother! And I already have friends! They just dont
go 2 my school!" I replyed, sounding as annoyed as ever!
"Yes, yes dear thats what I meant!" it wasnt!
"Ok, whatever, I have 2 take a shower, Dad didnt use all
the hot water again did he?" I asked, trying not 2 get mad.
"No," she started, "Your cousin did!"
"What! Is she here already? Really!?!?! Another reason
you should've woke me up sooner!" My cousin was coming
to stay with us 4 a few months while her parents were in
another country! She was filthy rich! Her Mom was a
fashion desighner, and her Dad was a lawyer! She was a
rich girl, but she didnt act like it! She acted alot like me!
She looked diferent though! She had strawberry blonde
hair, and pretty blue eyes, and she was medium height,
and was skinny! She was how I wanted to look! When
she came to town, she litaraly carried around a stick!
Boys here get a little crazy! Whenever they would try
to flirt with her, she would hit them with a stick! They
stopped after a while!

Ok, I got a shower, got dressed, and ran downstairs.
"Cuz!!!!!!!!!" I yelled at her! Her name was Amanica!
I always liked her name better then mine! Alot more
original!
"Oh! Hey Lola! Wuzap girl?" and she ran over 2 me.
We were like, the best of friends! She lived half way accoss
America though! Just then, the doorbell rang!
"Ill get it! Its proly 4 me!" I dashed across the living
room, and Amanica just looked at me like "Who?" She
also knew I didnt see my friends ever, so she was kinda
confused! "Oh Hey Gerard! Wuts up?" He was here! Yay!
I kinda didnt know why I was so happy about this, but
whatever!
"Oh!" Amanica said, actually, just call her Ama! Her nickname!
"Is that your boyfriend? Hahahahaha!" she said that in
a very teasing tone! I hate it when she does that!
"No!!!!!" I yelled at her, "He is so NOT my boyfriend! Hes
that guy I told you about on the phone yesterday!"
"Oh!" she began, "You mean the rude, loud, annoying,
stupid 1 with the idiot brother?" How could she! She said
it as if he wasnt even in the room! It bugged me so bad! I
couldnt believe her! It was like my Mother! She does
that! Well, her Mom is my Moms sister! Another annoying
person! I hated her 2! Anyways,
"Ama! How could you! Stop it!"
"What? You insult people infront of them all the time!"
Ya, I did, but still!
"No, I insult them 2 their faces! I insult them talking straight
at them! You insult people like there not even in the room!"
I did make a good point didnt I?
"Ya, whatever, lets go 2 school now!" She was ready 2
make her 1st immpression! The punk impression! She was
wearing a long black skirt, with fingerlace gloves, and
she had blue streaks in her hair, had black fingernails
with the word "Punk!" written on each hand, and she
talks and acts like a punk! She is awsome! She is my age,
only a couple months older! Were both 16! Were alot alike!
Also in taste! Like clothes, stuff like that! We both have
totally different cars though! I have some old beat up
corvet that will hardley run, and is covered in rust, and
she has a big beautiful jeap, it was red and had a yellow
line down both sides, and it had fake pleather seats,
with a dvd player in it! Like I said, her parents were
filthy rich! I was so jelous of her. Always had been.
"Ok, well, bye guys!" And I walked out the door.
"Well, now I have 2 new kids 2 show around school!" I said
once we got out on the front porch.
"Ok," said Ama, "We could walk, or we could take my
jeap."
"Walk!" me and Gerard both said at the same time, even
tho it was still freezing cold! She always tried 2 show off
her stuff, and that was 1 of the only few bad things about her.
It really bugged me. Of course, everything does!
"So, Lola, you gunna introduce me to your cute friend?"
Ama whispered in my ear.
"Ya, maybe in a minute!"
"Just do it now!" she demanded.
"Ok! Ok! Fine! Gerard, this is Amanica, Ama 4 short, shes
a rich punk whos Mom is a fashion desighner, and she
has a nice car, Ama, this is Gerard, hes funny, sarcstic,
and has an annoying brother. There!"
"Ok!" She said, thankfully. It was werid. "Hi Gerard!
How old are you? I am 16 and a half!" She looked like
she liked him! That little..... Wait! What am I saying? Nevermind!
"I am 17!" he replied. "My brothers 14. Hes the "annoying"
one."
"Oh, ok. Cool. Whats his name?" she asked, she gets 2
curious about other people lives!
"Mikey." I liked that name! I liked Gerards name better!
"And your last name?" she asked, like some private
investigator!
"Way. Gerard Ways my name." He sounded also kinda
annoyed! She was awsome, but she was also annoying!
"Ok." she replied, kinda getting that he was annoyed with
her curiosity!
Thats my cousin Amanica 4 ya!

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Once we got 2 school, Gerard and Amanica got alot of those
"New Kid" looks! I hate those looks! I got them the whole
first year I went here, and I still do! Its bugs me 2 death!
Well, I showed Gerard and Amanica around the school,
and then it was time 4 class! Gerard had all the same
classes as me, and Amanica had 2 stay with me, so we
stayed 2gether all day! Well, it was finally lunch time, and
we all sat at a table in the corner of the cafateria.
Gerard and Amanica both got alot of those strange,
"That kids a freak!" And, "Look at the new kid!" and
"Those Stupid Punks!" looks! People whispered about them
as if we couldnt hear! We did! I hated my school! Just
a bunch of fakes, plastics, and posers! I hated them all!
"Hey!" I had an idea! "We are allowed to go home 2 eat,
and I was thinking 2day, home is Mcdonalds!"
"Awsome idea cuz!" Ama said, very happily! She loved
fast food! Her boyfriend called her "The Fast Food Queen"!
"Ya! Lets go, I am so sick of all these posers." Gerard agreed.
"Ya! Lets go!"

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Once we were there, Amanica payed, and we ate. I got
fries and a shake! My favorite! Haha! Anyways,

"So," Gerard asked, "Is every1 at your school besides
you an Amanica a poser?"
"Yep! And Ama doesnt go to my school. Shes just here
for a few months. Then she gets 2 go 2 Rome."
"Rome?"
"Yep! She said back, very proudly! She was rich! We
werent.
"Hey, Ama, go get some desert." Gerard handed her
a 5 dollar bill, and she left. "You know what?"
"What?" I asked like an idiot.
"Your kinda cute!"
"Um, ok!" I never really thought of myself as cute! I am
a tall girl, with red hair, I was kinda chubby, and I had
brown eyes. I also had big feet! Not exactly cute. "Really?"
"Ya!" and we were both silent the rest of lunch.

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Ok, this is the last chapter I have written down so far! Ull have 2 wait untill later 2 see the next 1!



Chapter 5
Halloween

Ok, we walked back 2 school, and we
saw flyers EVERYWHERE! Aparently, there
was gunna be some Halloween Party on
Saturday! (It was Halloween soon!)
"Hey, we should go!" Amanica suggested,
"It would give me and Gerard a chance 2
make new friends!"
"No thanks!" I said, "I dont really
like partys, and am not really allowed
2 go 2 them!"
"Oh." She sounded really dissapointed!
"Ok, then what are we doing for Halloween?"
"Well," Gerard began, I cut him off, as
usual!
"We should just get a few friends 2gether
and watch scary movies!" I said, I get
bored, and love movies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Ya! Ok!" Gerard replied, I loved his
voice! Man, there is something majorly
wrong with me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never get like this
over a guy! All I want 2 do is sit and listen 2 him
talk! I could do that 4 hours! He continued.
"Me and Mikey were just gunna pull pranks on
people all night long! Like we do every year!
Oh, mind if he comes 2? Well, if he wants 2."
"No." I replied, "I dont mind."
"Ok!" Gee (Gerards nickname!) sounded excited.
"Why are you so excited about this?" I asked,
I mean, I dont have a brother, or a sister, but my
friend does, and whenever im over there, she only
talks about how much she hates him.
"Cuz. Were kinda close! I am sure he would want
2 me you also! Well, actually, he said you kinda
made him nervous on the phone."
"Ya I did!" I sounded proud of it, I was!
"And why is that saticfactory?" he asked, like I
sounded like a jerk. He was half sarcastic though.
"Cuz! He deserved it! He was the 1 who pushed me
down! He was rude!"
"Ya, whatever! Anyways, what time should we be
at your hous Saturday?" he changed the subject!
"Um, how bout 8?"
"Ok! Sounds good!"
"Ok!"
~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*~^!*^~

Well, it was Halloween, and me and Amanica were
sitting at home, waiting for Gerard and Mikey 2 get
there.
"Im Bored!!!!" yelled Amanica. She and me were
always bored! Always! Unless there was some huge
thing going on, we were always bored! ALWAYS!
I wasnt bored 2nite though! Gerard was coming over
and was gonna be here 4 hours 2 watch movies! I was
so happy! I didnt know why though! I mean, why was
I so happy when he was around? Not the rest of the
time, only when he was around? Only then did I feel
this way! It was confusing, and weird! I didnt know
why I was like this! I really didnt! Well, while we
were waiting for Gerard and Mikey, we got about
seven trick or treaters. Then, it was 8:30, and Gee
still wasnt here! I was worried! Really worried!
"When is he gonna be here?" Amanica asked.
"I dont know!" I said, still worried, "Ill call him
and Mikey!"
"Hello?" It was a womans voice. Well, Gee must live
with his parents, I mean hes only 17!
"Oh, hi! This is Lola. Is Gerard around?"
"Um, no." She said back, "He left about 20 minutes
ago."
"Oh, ok. Thanks." and I hung up.
"Well?" Amanica asked, stupidly.
"His Mom said he left over 20 minutes ago. I am
worried!"
"Oh, dont be!" she said, she never worries! Whenever
she gets worried about someone, she sends out her big
guards and private investigators team 2 see whats
up! I hated that! Its not fair! She gets everything!
Just then, there was a knock on the door.
"GERARD!!!!!!! FINNALY!!!!" I kinda freaked out!
So what? I gave him a hug, and he said,
"Whats up with you? Um, could you get off me please?"
"Oh! Ya! Sorry!"
"You still didnt answer my question. Whats up
with you?"
"Oh, I was worried." then instantly I swiched 2 mean
mode. "Where in the heck were you? I was so worried!
What kept you? Jerk!"
"HeyHeyHey!" he began, how dare he worry me!
"Our car broke down, so we had 2 walk! I also walked
2 the video store 2 get Halloween! Ok! Calm down!"
"Ok, fine! Oh, hi Mikey!" I said it in a taunting
voice! I loved freaking him out! Well, I loved freaking
all people out!
"Oh, um hi." He sounded scared of me! YES! Haha!
"Lola!" Gerard said, "Please dont freak out Mikey!
I mean the scary movies will scare the little kid enough!
Haha! Ow!" Mikey punched him in the shoulder,
Gerard hit him back!
"So, come in guys!"
"Ya, um, ok, I guess." Mikey still sounded scared of me.
"Oh, I wont hurt you 2 bad!"
"Ya, whatever."
"Mikey, you have 2 sit by the door and watch the
movie." Gerard said,
"Why?"
"Because! Someone has 2 give candy 2 the Trick or
Treaters got it dork?"
"No fair! Why Me?!?!?!"
"Cuz! Your youngest, and I said so!!!!!"
"Fine..." He was mad. Hahahahaha!
"Ok, what first?" I asked.
"Halloween all the way!" Gerard said, "I love that movie!"
"Me 2!" everyone agreed! Halloween it is! Mikey
sat by the door watching it over his shoulder. I
started stareing at Gerard like an idiot. I didnt
even watch the movie. I just stared at Gerard! I was
such an idiot. Did I like him? What is wrong with me!?!?!?!??!
I cant believe it. I think I actually do like him! I am so psycho!
"Hey, um, you, cousin girl!" Mikey was talking Amanica.
"Um, excuse me! My names Amanica!"
"Ya, Amanica, come here 4 a minute."
"Why? Where?"
"Just come 2 the kitchen for a minute!"
"I SAID WHY?"
"SHUT UP!!!!!" me and Gerard both yelled at the
same time.
"Ok, fine." They both left the room.
~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*~^!*~^!*~^!*~!^*~!^*~!^*~!^*~!^~*!^ ~*!^~*!^

"What is with you dork?" Amanica said said, I didnt
hear much, but I did hear some.
"Listen! I just wanted 2 give Gee and Lola some privacy!
Because, they kinda look like they like each other."
"Oh, ok!" I hated schemes like these. It made me mad!
Man is Mikey gonna get it.
~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~!*^~! *^~!*~^!

"You know what there doing dont you?" Gerard asked.
"Yep! Trying 2 give us some "privacy" so you'll ask me
out or somethin like that."
"Uh-huh!" Gerard didnt sound 2 suprised at Mikeys
atempt.
"Its not gonna work. We dont like each other. Do we?"
I sounded so stupid.
"I dunno! Do we?"
"Hey I asked you first!"
"Well I dont know!"

I could hear Amanica from the kitchen.
"They look like there fighting."
"Duh!" Mikey said, Amanica looked suprised any1
would talk 2 her like that.

Anyways, about an hour passed, they were in the kitchen,
eating all our food. Oh, by the way, where were my parents
during all this? At a party. Anyways, Gerard started
talking 1st. "I better go home! Sorry I have 2 leave!"
"Oh, its ok i guess!" I said, dissapointed.
"MIKEY! COME ON ITS TIME TO GO HOME!!!!"
I could hear Mikey from the kitchen,
"Ya, just a minute!"
"No, NOW!!!!!!!!!!" He came out of the kitchen, and
glared at Gerard. It was kinda funny! Amanica yelled
bye from the kitchen, still eating, and Mikey stood
of the porch waiting for Gerard.
"Well, bye!" Gerard said, I will still disapointed.
"Bye!" Then, I got up, and walked with him 2 the door.
Mikey already started down the street, then Gerard
kissed me on the cheek, and went running after Mikey.

[bethany17]

Seems a bit excited, with all the !!!s. Really cool, but possibly revise it 4 punctuation?

[Popstar2be]

Ya, sry bout that. Besides that do u like it?

[*Sunflower*]

I don't know if this was intentional, but you should replace the 2s and 4s with real words. It's distracting and doesn't look professional.

[Popstar2be]

Ok, but besides that did u like it?

[wow]

the first chapter was boring. thats all i read. whats a fanfic.

[Popstar2be]

Ok, 4 one, u should read the other chapters 2 cuz those r alot better, and a fanfic is a fan fiction! ITs when a fan of sum1 makes a story about them! Fan Fiction!

[*Sunflower*]

Ok, 4 one, u should read the other chapters 2 cuz those r alot better, and a fanfic is a fan fiction! ITs when a fan of sum1 makes a story about them! Fan Fiction!
Okay, for one, you should read the other chapters too because they are a lot better, and a fanfic is a fan fiction! It's when a fan of someone writes a story about them! Fan fiction!

Sorry, I just had to translate that.

[Popstar2be]

Okay, for one, you should read the other chapters too because they are a lot better, and a fanfic is a fan fiction! It's when a fan of someone writes a story about them! Fan fiction!

Sorry, I just had to translate that.


LOL! Ok, sorry I dont spell things out! Its not that I cant spell, I actually once came in third in a spelling bee, but I just like slang better! Sorry!

[Raspberry06]

OK, heres the thing I'm no professional. Howver, i write many fan fics, and uh....the story is just boring I'm sorry, But i feel like i have to tell you the truth, so you can become a better writer. First off, there was way to many of these..!!!!!!. second of all You need to double space, all your lines are crammed togather. Third of all, too much dialog. And 4'th of all, the story had no plot, No feeling at all. Its all people talking back in forth with boring, way over-dramatized sentences. I was way confused reading it, and had no idea what was going on.

[Popstar2be]

OK, heres the thing I'm no professional. Howver, i write many fan fics, and uh....the story is just boring I'm sorry, But i feel like i have to tell you the truth, so you can become a better writer. First off, there was way to many of these..!!!!!!. second of all You need to double space, all your lines are crammed togather. Third of all, too much dialog. And 4'th of all, the story had no plot, No feeling at all. Its all people talking back in forth with boring, way over-dramatized sentences. I was way confused reading it, and had no idea what was going on.


Ok, fine. Whatever. Thnx anyways! The next chapters I write, I will take ur advice! I will make it better! Would u read them when I post them, and tell me wut u think about it?

[animallover7249]

the first chapter was boring. thats all i read. whats a fanfic.
exactly! i didnt even know the kid was a girl to halfway down, thought it was a gay guy..anyway, IT was annoying and boring. and I didnt read any of the other ones...

[wow]

Ok, 4 one, u should read the other chapters 2 cuz those r alot better, and a fanfic is a fan fiction! ITs when a fan of sum1 makes a story about them! Fan Fiction!
because u said the others were better, i decided to read the second chapter and got half way through and it wass the exact same. annoying. boring. pointless. it kinda sucks

[Popstar2be]

Ya, whatev. Alot of people say they luv it. People I dont even know. I posted on other 4ums. Thnx 4 ur opinion tho. Other people like it. And if u say they just said that 2 be nice, seriously, dont waste ur time, I dont care. I just wanted 2 know wut u thought, and since u hated it, I know that every1 on this 4um hates it, so please dont tell me about it anymore, cuz I dont care. Thnx again tho. But please, dont waste ur time saying its boring anymore. Again, I dont care.

[wow]

Ya, whatev. Alot of people say they luv it. People I dont even know. I posted on other 4ums. Thnx 4 ur opinion tho. Other people like it. And if u say they just said that 2 be nice, seriously, dont waste ur time, I dont care. I just wanted 2 know wut u thought, and since u hated it, I know that every1 on this 4um hates it, so please dont tell me about it anymore, cuz I dont care. Thnx again tho. But please, dont waste ur time saying its boring anymore. Again, I dont care.
wwhooa chill out. first of all, i didnt hate it. i just thought it was boring. second of all, just becaue i didnt like it that much doesn't mean everyone else feels the same way. 7th of all just because maybe a few people dont like it dont just give it up. like there are a bunch of movies that some people like and some hate but just because some people ahte it they dont shut the whole movie down...

[animallover7249]

TRANSLATOR TRANSLATOR where did she go? 4um?? Sorry hun, but I am posting on a FORUM. And, if you didnt care, you wouldnt of asked, now would you? And stop acting like other people dont have minds maybe someone here will like it. Again I am still surpirsed you even dared to say you dont care when you asked so many times, and when people corrected things "besides that do you like it??" (but you didnt say it in english)

[Popstar2be]

Ok, I was just curious 2 wut u thought! I dont care if u hate it! I posted 2 see wut u thought, and if u didnt like it, I dont care! I just wanted 2 see! I was just curious 2 wut u thought! And since u dont like it, I dont care anymore!

[animallover7249]

lmao that makes NO SINCE you wanted to see our views but since out views werent what you wanted them to be you no longer care. hilarious.

[wow]

lmao that makes NO SINCE you wanted to see our views but since out views werent what you wanted them to be you no longer care. hilarious.
woord... or as you say "8427987w984778o9457987r89787d987" <<short for word

[Popstar2be]

Ok, I didnt really care either way! I was just kinda curious! Also, that whole, makes "NO SINCE" sorry, but that kinda "since" is spelled, "SENSE!" ok! And dont say anything about my spelling! I can spell, I just write this way cuz its easier! Also, I dont give a crap if its hilarious, and I dont have 2 make sense 2u people! Ok! I didnt really care wut u thought, I got alot, and I mean, ALOT of emails from people saying they liked it and wanted me 2 write more! I still do, I am starting a new story, and it is also good! I dont care wut u think, I dont care if I am hilarious, I JUST DONT FREAKIN CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. It did make sense, ask any1 else, maybe ur tiny mids just dont understand! And at least I make up stories, instead of just critisizing other peoples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[wow]

Ok, I didnt really care either way! I was just kinda curious! Also, that whole, makes "NO SINCE" sorry, but that kinda "since" is spelled, "SENSE!" ok! And dont say anything about my spelling! I can spell, I just write this way cuz its easier! Also, I dont give a crap if its hilarious, and I dont have 2 make sense 2u people! Ok! I didnt really care wut u thought, I got alot, and I mean, ALOT of emails from people saying they liked it and wanted me 2 write more! I still do, I am starting a new story, and it is also good! I dont care wut u think, I dont care if I am hilarious, I JUST DONT FREAKIN CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. It did make sense, ask any1 else, maybe ur tiny mids just dont understand! And at least I make up stories, instead of just critisizing other peoples!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahahaha. u tell us how u didnt care either way and u keep bragging about how u got ooh so man emails about how extremely excellent it was. and geeez chill out. stop telling us 2 nnot critiscize u. u asked for critiscism. dont expect angel little comments all raving about ur excellent newyork times bestseller fanfic. and i have written stuff. better than that. infact everyday in english class we have something called writers notebook and u have 3 minutes to write about a topic and then u read it out loud and every day everybodie's half page is better than that whole thing.